DieterTheuns's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[9th and Hennepin]

From the moment I met her I knew she meant trouble

Nice image in terms of idea/composition. I only suggest you take a second look at the hand, and some of the shading on the face. The way the water pours off her clothes is great, but I take that due to time constraints, the drips on the ground are a bit rushed.

[Friday Flood #3!]

Rebuttal

Yet again, you make an amazing drawing. Downright great expression and I love the drips blending in with the character itself. I have but 1 point of critique: the left arm seems a bit long.

A 10 because you give the most amazing blow-jobs.

TurkeyOnAStick responds:

The arms are meant to be long :P

I CAUGHT YOU IN MY ART TRAP

[Kingfisher]

Oranje boven (in de zolder, waar niemand kijkt :3)

This is without a doubt really nicely done, but it just doesn't tickle my style-bone the right way. You kind of got lazy on the tail, I think.

The simplistic water-splashes and bubbles are downright great.

J-qb responds:

I put more time and effort in the tail than in any other part of the drawing; I just couldnt get it to look right, so I decided to just go for the plain tail I have now. Thanks for the review

[Green Flash]

QJBDFjshask

There seem to be some perspective problems here. The footsteps suggest a downwards movement, but the sand doesn't change in volume. The water pretty much is an overview shot without depth.

I like the lines in the waves.

Luwano responds:

I messed that up on the footstep part. I wanted them to "go away" from the viewer but overdid it. Thanks for you review!

[Night Dip - Flood the Portal 3]

Prawxeefaassdfg

I don't like how you did the water. It seems kinda out of place and blurry in contrast to the girl. Still love your cross-hatching as lightning/shades tho.

[Friiiiday]

Friday Jooooones

I just love the way how you integrated the "Friday Flood" logo, and of course the drawing itself is great. I honestly can't give many critique, it looks pretty great.
The left leg of the girl getting choked does looks odd. I know it's supposed to be bended, but it is so wide and short, it looks as if it got amputated. The knee lies lower.

Good job though :3